superj88 发表于 2021-8-13 15:42   全显示 1楼
一见钟情这个题材很难写，尤其是在女主角出场时有让人敬而远之的呕吐现象，相信这个男主只是关心一下。女主角在无人关心的情况下得到一包纸巾是贯穿整个文章的主线，而忘记的电话号码与10年后偶遇的安排是符合人文情节的，作者如此安排和铺垫是蛮尽心到位的了。肉戏的描写也给这个短文在此也表达了女主角的感恩，因为限于家庭缘故，但也只是对当年少女情怀的满足和自我放纵。这个文章短小但信息量还是慢慢的，情怀、温馨与浪漫交织，谢谢作者！
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