wakakahei 发表于 2021-3-18 11:14   全显示 1楼
作者康样子应该是第一次写文? 第一次写文写成这样非常不错啦~继续加油!

高情商: 文章催眠要素,流程,剧情上都非常齐全合理,肉戏上也比较细致入情.
低情商: 催眠剧情太过标准,创新点太少.标题的笔记类催眠方式也没有体现啊~依然是直接催眠植入,人偶式指令,这就缺了点意思~

不过继续加油,作为处女作,努力写文才是最重要的!
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